Here’s my try at it.
Patty L. Fletcher, is an author who, writes true to life, thus bringing you, into her moments.
Source: Branding Statements for Authors
PattysWorld
Bridging the great chasm which separates the disAbled from the non-disAbled
pujakins
June 27, 2017Well said, do drop the commas. My attempt: Tasha Halpert is an opti-mystic, specializing in at native perspectives.
Patty
June 27, 2017Amazing!
Some yell and fuss, If not enough commas, and you say, drop them. ð
I believe there must be several schools of thought.
I allowed spell-check to choose.
Sharon E. Cathcart
June 27, 2017IMO, the only one you need is between life and thus. It looks good, though!
Patty
June 30, 2017Thanks.
pujakins
June 30, 2017You are so right on! And I’m no exper with commas however I do know that less is best.
Patty
June 30, 2017Since this conversation started, Iâve put this question to several different groups, and have gotten three different answers.
The one I liked best, and most likely will use is the reading out loud test.
A comma where you wish to take a breath.